2696 2006-01-11 18:47:53 +0000 [Ser] mangled sentence 2006-01-20 22:00:05 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified XPath / XQuery / XSLT Serialization 1.0 Candidate Recommendation All All CLOSED FIXED P2 normal --- 1 joannet joannet public-qt-comments oldest_to_newest 7780 0 joannet 2006-01-11 18:47:54 +0000 The first paragraph of section 5 reads: "The XML output method serializes the normalized sequence as an XML entity that MUST satisfy the rules for either a well-formed XML document entity or a well-formed XML external general parsed entity, or both. A serialization error [err:SERE0003] results if the serializer is unable to satisfy those rules, except for content modified by the character expansion phase of serialization, as described in 4 Phases of Serialization, which could result in the serialized output being not well-formed but will not result in a serialization error. If a serialization error results, the serializer MUST signal the error." This second sentence should be rephrased. original comment raised in the members mailing list by Michael Kay: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/w3c-query-editors/2005Oct/0010.html Suggested resolution: A serialization error [err:SERE0003] results if the serializer is unable to satisfy those rules, except for content modified by the character expansion phase of serialization, as described in 4 Phases of Serialization. The effects of the character expansion phase could result in the serialized output being not well-formed, but will not result in a serialization error. If a serialization error results, the serializer MUST signal the error. 7928 1 joannet 2006-01-20 21:59:54 +0000 The XSL WG accepted the suggested resolution on Jan. 19 telcon.