22190 2013-05-29 04:32:22 +0000 Unlucky wording: "access … is accessible" 2013-06-19 08:51:44 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified HTML WG HTML Image Description Extension unspecified All All RESOLVED FIXED https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/html-proposals/raw-file/default/longdesc1/longdesc.html#longdesc a11y, a11y_text-alt P2 enhancement --- 22187 1 xn--mlform-iua chaals faulkner.steve public-html-admin xn--mlform-iua public-html-bugzilla oldest_to_newest 88360 0 xn--mlform-iua 2013-05-29 04:32:22 +0000 Current text: ]] Obviously, it is important that access to the long description is accessible to users. Further information on how to do this can be found in [UAAG]. [[ It is unclear what the above paragraph says: * An "access" that "is accessible" sounds like it is about about an "accessible URL". * The text uses the wording "long description", see bug 22187. * (The word "obviously" sounds a bit like a weaselword.) Attempt of improved text: ]] USER AGENT access to INDEPENDENT descriptionS ALSO HAS TO BE accessible to THE users OF THE USER AGENT. Further information on how to do this can be found in [UAAG]. [[ 88383 1 chaals 2013-05-29 18:42:34 +0000 Agree that the wording is not very nice, but I don't like yours either :) I'll do something about it... 88405 2 xn--mlform-iua 2013-05-29 21:17:36 +0000 (In reply to comment #1) > Agree that the wording is not very nice, but I don't like yours either :) Agree. Don't like it myself. > I'll do something about it... Good. 89569 3 chaals 2013-06-19 08:51:44 +0000 Text added to editor's draft that will be published today...