16204 2012-03-02 18:18:45 +0000 editorial - sec. 1.2 needs a few commas 2012-03-05 20:28:56 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified HTML WG HTML5 differences from HTML4 unspecified All All CLOSED FIXED P2 normal --- 1 dsb zcorpan annevk mike public-html-admin public-html-wg-issue-tracking public-html-bugzilla oldest_to_newest 64928 0 dsb 2012-03-02 18:18:45 +0000 In section 1.2, the second sentence says: To keep the authoring language relatively simple for authors several elements and attributes are not included as outlined in the other sections of this document, such as presentational elements that are better dealt with using CSS. That would be cleared with a few more commas, perhaps as: To keep the authoring language relatively simple for authors, several elements and attributes are not included, as outlined in the other sections of this document, such as presentational elements that are better dealt with using CSS. (Note that you don't want the middle per of that to read "not included as outlined in..." (which would make this second contradict or override the later sections).) 65018 1 zcorpan 2012-03-05 15:34:24 +0000 EDITOR'S RESPONSE: This is an Editor's Response to your comment. If you are satisfied with this response, please change the state of this bug to CLOSED. If you have additional information and would like the editor to reconsider, please reopen this bug. If you would like to escalate the issue to the full HTML Working Group, please add the TrackerRequest keyword to this bug, and suggest title and text for the tracker issue; or you may create a tracker issue yourself, if you are able to do so. For more details, see this document: http://dev.w3.org/html5/decision-policy/decision-policy.html Status: Accepted Change Description: http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/html5/html4-differences/Overview.src.html.diff?r1=1.155;r2=1.156 Rationale: Concurred with reporter's comments