1533 2005-07-10 00:51:25 +0000 [FS] editorial: 2.1.4 Notations for environments 2005-09-29 14:30:25 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified XPath / XQuery / XSLT Formal Semantics 1.0 Last Call drafts All All CLOSED FIXED P2 minor --- 1 jmdyck simeon public-qt-comments oldest_to_newest 4480 0 jmdyck 2005-07-10 00:51:25 +0000 2.1.4 Notations for environments "This document uses environment groups that group related environments." I think you'd be better off if you changed your terminology somewhat: Instead of saying: statEnv and dynEnv are "environment groups" whose members are "environments", say: statEnv and dynEnv are "environments", (some of) whose members are "mappings" ["dictionaries"] Note that after section 3 (and sometimes even within it), statEnv and dynEnv *are* generally referred to as "environments". Also note that it's "statEnv" and "dynEnv", not "statEnvGroup" and "dynEnvGroup". (leftover from last year, comment #019) "which models to the [XPath/XQuery]'s dynamic context" Delete "to". "Environment groups can be updated, using the following notation:" The list omits the notation for updating via a non-mapping component (as used in 4.9, 5.4, etc). "the expression$x - 3." Insert space before '$'.