1480 2005-05-22 18:10:25 +0000 Various editorial quirks 2005-07-21 19:12:37 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified XPath / XQuery / XSLT XSLT 2.0 Last Call drafts PC Linux CLOSED FIXED P2 minor --- 1 frans.englich mike public-qt-comments oldest_to_newest 3148 0 frans.englich 2005-05-22 18:10:25 +0000 Hello, In the XSLT 2.0 W3C Working Draft 4 April 2005, I claim to have found the editorial misses as outlined below. * The example "Example: Creating a Processing Instruction" in 11.6 Creating Processing Instructions, appears to me to contain an invalid XML fragment. The xsl:processing-instruction element is closed right before the select attribute, which should probably have been part of the element. * The end of the second paragraph in section 2.3 Initiating a Transformation, has a space before the period. Tip: I noticed it, but then forgot, and when I was to write down the error I had to find it again which I did by searching for " ." -- you could add that to a checklist(although it produces a lot of false positives, if not a more clever regexp is used). * The first bullet point in J.2.3 Minor Changes has a "the" in-appropriately: Instead of the allowing the output method complete freedom to add namespace nodes, [...]" * In my notes I had also written down the following, but it appears to be fixed: <quote> The second bullet point in section "J.2.1 Pervasive changes" contains the word "features" duplicated: The specifications of many features features (for example keys, xsl:number, the format-number function, the xsl:import mechanism, and the description of attribute sets) have been rewritten to make them clearer and more precise. </quote> Cheers, Frans 3029 1 mike 2005-05-23 09:47:01 +0000 * The example "Example: Creating a Processing Instruction" in 11.6 Creating Processing Instructions, appears to me to contain an invalid XML fragment. The xsl:processing-instruction element is closed right before the select attribute, which should probably have been part of the element. Thanks, fixed. * The end of the second paragraph in section 2.3 Initiating a Transformation, has a space before the period. Tip: I noticed it, but then forgot, and when I was to write down the error I had to find it again which I did by searching for " ." -- you could add that to a checklist(although it produces a lot of false positives, if not a more clever regexp is used). Thanks. These errors usually arise because of the use of markup in the source XML to indicate changes from one version to the next. * The first bullet point in J.2.3 Minor Changes has a "the" in-appropriately: Instead of the allowing the output method complete freedom to add namespace nodes, [...]" Fixed (this one seems to have survived many drafts unnoticed!) Thanks for the proof-reading. We will assume you are happy with this response unless you reopen the bug. Michael Kay