10949 2010-10-01 08:07:50 +0000 [XQuery11] editorial: 4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration 2011-04-26 21:43:12 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified XPath / XQuery / XSLT XQuery 3.0 Member-only Editors Drafts PC Linux RESOLVED FIXED P2 minor --- 1 jmdyck jonathan.robie jim.melton public-qt-comments oldest_to_newest 40401 0 jmdyck 2010-10-01 08:07:50 +0000 4.10 Decimal-Format Declaration [1] "A decimal-format declaration defines statically known decimal formats," It would be more consistent to say something like: "A decimal-format declaration defines a decimal format," or "A decimal-format declaration adds a decimal format to the statically known decimal formats," [2] "It is a static error for a query prolog to contain two decimal formats with the same name, or to contain two default decimal formats. [err:XQST0111]." A query prolog doesn't 'contain' decimal formats. You can say either that: it contains decimal-format declarations, or that it declares/defines decimal formats. Also, the "[err:XQST0111]" shouldn't be a separate sentence. [3] "It is a static error for a decimal-format to specify..." After "decimal-format", insert "declaration". [4] "It is a static error if [...] the properties [...] do not each have distinct values." Delete "each". 47723 1 jonathan.robie 2011-04-26 21:43:12 +0000 Resolved in query-prolog.xml, revision 1.73.