1037 2005-01-20 20:27:19 +0000 Comments of editorial nature 2005-07-18 18:52:32 +0000 1 1 1 Unclassified WS Choreography Last Call Comment: Confirmed Closed unspecified PC Linux CLOSED FIXED http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-chor-comments/2005Jan/0022.html P2 normal -- 1 gritzinger martin.chapman martin.chapman oldest_to_newest 2856 0 gritzinger 2005-01-20 20:27:19 +0000 1. Section 1, 1st para, 1st sentence. Typographical error Replace "organizations have being developing" with "organizations have been developing" 2. Section 1.5, 1st para, 1st sentence. Replace "A Choreography Description Language" with "The Choreography Description Language" 3. Section 2.1, 3rd bullet, 3rd sub-bullet, 1st sentence. Point of clarity Should the sentence "A Finalizer Block describes how to specify additional interactions that ..." be changed to "A Finalizer Block specifies additional interactions that ..."? 4. Section 2.2.2, 2nd para, last sentence. Typographical error Replace "... as well as semantic ;checks, ..." with "... as well as semantic checks, ..." 5. Section 2.2.2, 2nd para, last sentence. Replace "... such as unicity ..." with "... such as uniqueness ..." 6. Section 2.2.2, example code, <variable> element, role attribute. Typographical error Replace role="randomRome" with role="randomRole" 7. Section 2.2.2, example code, 2nd <xi:include> element, xpointer attribute. Missing closing " Replace xpointer="xpointer(//choreography/variable[1]) with xpointer="xpointer(//choreography/variable[1])" 8. Section 2.2.5, 1st para, 2nd sentence. Change font to courier "description" 9. Section 2.2.5, 1st para, 3rd sentence. Point of clarity Replace "... of the description." with "... of the description sub-element." 10. Section 2.3.4, 3rd last paragraph, 1st sentence. Change font to courier "identity" 11. Section 2.4.2, 5th last paragraph, 1st sentence. Change font to courier "free" 12. Section 2.4.3.1, 1st function, 1st sentence. Typographical error Replace ... about it,s own time with ... about it's own time 13. Section 2.4.3.1, 2nd function, 1st sentence. Typographical error Replace ... about it,s own date with ... about it's own date 14. Section 2.4.3.1, 3rd function, 1st sentence. Typographical error Replace ... about it,s own date/time with ... about it's own date/time 15. Section 2.4.3.1, 4th function, 1st sentence. Typographical error Replace Returns "true" if, (a) used in a guard ... with Returns "true" if (a) used in a guard ... 16. Section 2.4.3.1, 4th function, 1st sentence. Grammar Replace ... either the guard or the repetition condition were enabled ... with ... either the guard or the repetition condition was enabled ... 17. Section 2.4.3.1, 5th function, 1st sentence. Typographical error Replace Returns "true" if, (a) used in a guard ... with Returns "true" if (a) used in a guard ... 18. Section 2.4.3.1, 5th function, 1st sentence. Grammar Replace ... either the guard or the repetition condition were enabled ... with ... either the guard or the repetition condition was enabled ... 19. Section 2.5.2.3, 10th paragraph, 1st bullet. Missing word "from" Replace When the action attribute is set to "request", then the information exchange happens fromRole to toRole with When the action attribute is set to "request", then the information exchange happens from fromRole to toRole 20. Section 2.5.2.3, 11th paragraph, 7th bullet. Change font to courier "receive" 21. Section 2.5.2.3, 11th paragraph, 11th bullet, 1st sub-bullet. Change font to courier "send" 22. Section 2.5.2.3, 11th paragraph, 11th bullet, 2nd sub-bullet. Change font to courier "send" 23. Section 2.5.2.3, 12th paragraph, 1st sentence. Replace "... or the deadline before an Interaction MUST complete." with "... or the deadline before which an Interaction MUST complete." 24. Section 2.5.2.3, 13th paragraph, 1st sentence. Replace "The OPTIONAL element record is used ..." with "The OPTIONAL record element is used ..." 25. Section 2.5.2.3, 13th paragraph, 2nd bullet. Change font to courier "source" 26. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 6th bullet. Change font to courier "record" 27. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 7th bullet. Change font to courier "record" 28. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 9th bullet. Change font to courier "record" 29. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 9th bullet. Change font to courier "record" Note two instances of "record" element in one sentence. 30. Section 2.5.2.3, 15th paragraph, 10th bullet, 2nd sub-bullet. Change font to courier "record" 31. Section 2.5.3, 1st paragraph, 2nd bullet. Replace "An "Order Placement" Choreography, where the "Buyer" Role places and order ..." with "An "Order Placement" Choreography, where the "Buyer" Role places an order ..." 2906 1 martin.chapman 2005-01-25 21:13:33 +0000 editorial typos 4193 2 martin.chapman 2005-02-14 21:12:47 +0000 From meeting on 25-jan-05: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/member-ws-chor/2005Jan/att-0010/2005-01- 25_WS-Chor_Notes.txt Editorial - typos. 3072 3 gritzinger 2005-05-25 20:52:02 +0000 Changed all these typographical errors as suggested in the issue description. 4598 4 martin.chapman 2005-07-14 15:28:15 +0000 Yin-Leng has been informed of the group's resolution to this issue [1]. changed to closed, and awaiting confirmation. [1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-chor- comments/2005Jul/0002.html 4821 5 martin.chapman 2005-07-18 18:52:32 +0000 Yin Leng has confirmed the resolution: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-chor-comments/2005Jul/0010.html