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Comment LC-2263

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Commenter: Marcin Hanclik <Marcin.Hanclik@access-company.com>

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[Free text description]Document as a wholeWidgets 1.0: Access Requests Policy /**/ <!--... W3C Working Draft 4 August 2009 Abstract Status of this Document Table of Contents 1 Introduction 1.1 Definitions access request grant access widget execution scopes deny access network resource feature-enabled API widget execution scope web execution scope 1.2 The Widget Family of Specifications Widgets 1.0 family of specifications 1.3 Design Goals and Requirements Security model Restricted access to remote web resources Security Current development practice or industry best- practice Interoperability 2 Policy 3 The access Element Attributes uri URI attribute special value supported subdomains boolean attribute Usage example 4 Processing model access-request list ifragment ipath iuser info iquery in error ignore rule for getting a single attribute value valid URI iuser info in error ignore rule for getting a single attribute value valid boolean value in error ignore ifragment ipath iquery unsupported in error ignore ToASCII Rule for Granting Access to a URI identifiable Resources Acknowledgements Normative References [RFC3987] [URI] [RFC3490] [Widgets-PC] Informative References [Widgets-Reqs] [Widgets-DigSig] [Widgets-Updates] [Widgets-APIs] [HTML5] [HTTP] [HTTPS]
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Comment:

In section 1.3 [1] (non-normative) I suggest changing all the instances of word "service" to "resource".
Service could mean e.g. mail, telephony, messaging service etc. and WARP is about access to retrievable network resources.

Thanks,
Marcin

[1] http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets-access/#design-goals-and-requirements


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