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Comment LC-2809
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Commenter: harry.loots@ieee.org

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Resolution status:

Name: Harry Loots
Email: harry.loots@ieee.org
Affiliation: EPO
Document: TD
Item Number: G8
Part of Item: Applicability
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: Suggestion for grammatical improvement
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
Sentence described in proposed change contains grammatical error. See below:

Proposed Change:
Current text:
An alternate version of an online video of a family escaping from a burning building, there is a continuous dialogue between the husband and wife about where the children are.

Suggested change:
delete {An}
insert {In an}
New text:
[begin add]In an[end add] [begin delete]An[end delete] alternate version of an online video of a family escaping from a burning building, there is a continuous dialogue between the husband and wife about where the children are.

Alternative to suggested change is to substitute [,] with [:]
(space separated ids)
(Please make sure the resolution is adapted for public consumption)


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