RJ,
as we discussed, this is the list of minor edits to the CCXML spec.
I found:
- a few missing whitespaces
- many places where <code> text should be present. I cannot promise
the list is complete, but these corrections would improve readability
I didn't check inside the tables, because not sure it wasn't too bad
for you.
I found, but not reported the fact that the state names, i.e ALERTING
can be found in different shapes in the spec:
a. normal text (i.e. Section 7.1)
b. capitalized (i.e. Section 7.2.2.1)
c. capital and style <code> (i.e. Section 8.3)
This might another round of corrections if someone thinks it will help.
Paolo.
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6.2.11.1
- last sentence: "<log>is an empty element." => MISSING WHITESPACE
10.5.8.1
- first paragraph (middle): "execution of<unjoin>" => MISSING WHITESPACE
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*** Elements, etc missing <code>
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3.5.3.1
- <move>
3.5.3.8
- in first paragraph: connection.alerting
6.1
- (optional) in third paragraph: session.*
- in fourth paragraph: <createccxml>
6.3.4
- first sentence: error.* and ccxml.kill
6.3.6
- first sentence: <exit>
7.3.6
- middle paragraph: <join>
8.2.1.1
- Last paragraph: var x.y
8.3
- description of session.uri: session.uri includes ...
9.1
- last but four paragraph: connection.alerting ,
session.connections['1234'].state ,
connection.disconnected , <transition>
- last but two: ccxml.kill
9.2.2.1
- numbered bullet 2: true
9.2.2.3
- first sentence: <transition>
9.2.3.1
- last but two before table: 'ccxml'
- first paragraph after targettype values: x-
- paragraph starting "When inline XML is specified": two times <send>
- sentence before five bullets: targettype
- inside the five bullets: several occurrences of "ccxml" , "basichttp"
, "dialog"
9.2.4.1
- fourth par "A <move>": <join>
10.2.4
- second paragraph: connection.connected , connection.failed , <join> ,
<unjoin>
- two bullets: error.semantic , <merge> , error.conncetion.wrong
- paragraph starting "Finally, once an event":
connection.connected , connection.accept.failed , connection.failed ,
connection.disconnected
10.4
- two "main ways" bullets: <dialogprepare> , <dialogstart> ,
connectionid ,
conferenceid , <join> , <unjoin>
- paragraph starting "Bridges can be either":
<dialogprepare> , <dialogstart> , mediadirection , joindirection
- paragraph starting "Asynchronous events": <destroyconference>
- last three bullets:
- first bullet:
<dialogprepare> , <dialogstart> , connectionid , conferenceid ,
dialog.started , conference.joined
- second bullet:
joinid , connection.connected , conference.joined ,
error.conference.join
joinid , error.conference.join two times , connection.connected
- third bullet:
many times <join> and <unjoin> , error.conference.join , reason
10.4.2
- first paragraph: duplex , full
- second paragraph (after first picture): mediadirection , both
- paragraph after fourth picture: duplex full
10.5.4.3
- second paragraph: myConidVar
10.5.5.1
- second paragraph: <createconference> , conference.joined ,
conference.unjoined
- third paragraph: <createconference> , confname
10.5.6.1
- second paragraph: <createconference> , conference.unjoined
10.5.7.1
- all four paragraphs: id1 , id2 (eliminate ''), several <join> ,
<createconference> , several conference.joined , error.conference.join
10.5.8.1
- all three paragraphs: id1 , id2 (eliminate ''), several <unjoin> ,
several conference.unjoined , error.conference.unjoin
10.5.9.1
- first paragraph: <disconnect> two times
- third paragraph: connection.failed
10.5.10.2
- second paragraph: connection.merged , connection.merge.failed
10.6.1
- second paragraph: many <transition> , connection.connected
10.6.13
- second paragraph: id1 , id2 (eliminate ''), conference.joined
10.6.14
- second paragraph: id1 , id2 (eliminate ''), conference.unjoined
10.6.19
- first par: <merge>
Appendix K
- in the whole appendix:
"basichttp"
application/x-www-form-urlencoded
"sessionid"
"name"
"eventsource"
"http://www.example.com/ccxml/basichttp"
"ccxmlsession1"
"http://www.example.org/ccxmlext"
"agent12"
"orlando"
"RE445"
"POST"
"session"
<send>
- (optional) last two paragraphs before HTTP response codes:
"foo" , "bar" , event$.foo , "a.b" , "1" , "a" , "b" ,
"2" , "a.d.x" = "3" , "a.d.y" = "4"
Appendix L
- in the whole appendix:
"createsession"
"uri"
"basichttp"
"agent.role"
"eventsource"