(Sample of a dialog too big for the table.)
Editing team: Your proposed new text includes things that are out of scope. Instead, we suggest
- This is the new text we suggest.
Submitter: Some of this should be in scope, but I can see where there may be too much details. As alternative, suggest
- This is my alternate suggestion.
XG: reviewed alternatives and decided on following text
- This is the text to appear in report.