ISSUE-94: Wordsmithing
Wordsmithing
- State:
- CLOSED
- Product:
- Canonical EXI
- Raised by:
- Youenn Fablet
- Opened on:
- 2013-09-12
- Description:
- A)
In Section 2, the sentence “Following the presented algorithms guarantees that logically-identical documents produce identical serialized EXI Body stream representations” looks a bit odd.
Is it missing a coma after following? Or is it “The following presented algorithms…”?
Also guarantees -> guarantee?
B)
I am not 100% sure, but there are a few sentences that uses the verb “bases”.
Like “the process for building a Canonical EXI stream bases upon…”
It seems more natural and easy to read to use “is based”, e.g. ” the process for building a Canonical EXI stream is based upon…”.
Maybe this is only my personal taste.
- Related Actions Items:
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- Related emails:
- ISSUE-94: Wordsmithing [Canonical EXI] (from sysbot+tracker@w3.org on 2013-09-12)
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