[PageVisibility] Spec review

Only a few suggested wording improvements.

Other specs only say "The X attribute", not "The X IDL attribute". Should  
we simplify this spec?

Vendor prefixes uses different wording than other specs.

The sentence "To accommodate accessibility ..." is repeated three times,  
this could presumably be simplified or rewritten somewhat.

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Sigbjørn Vik
Core Quality Services
Opera Software

Received on Monday, 14 November 2011 08:31:33 UTC