[widgets] P&C Last Call comments, 7

9.1
Step 1
The section is about acquiring the Zip archive.
It is however only about data transfer protocol. What about simple files in the filesystem?

Step4
This step only applied to user agents ...
should be
This step only is applied to user agents ...

Step7
What to do when more then one ...
should be
What to do when more than one ...

For example, assume the user agent's locales<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#user-agents-locales> only contains the ...
should be
For example, assume the user agent's locales<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#user-agents-locales> only contain the ...

However, if the user agent's locales<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#user-agents-locales> was "*",
should be
However, if the user agent's locales<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#user-agents-locales> contained only "*",

type whose xml:lang<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#xmllang> attribute match the language
should be
type whose xml:lang<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#xmllang> attribute matches the language

can ask the user agent ignore an object
should be
can ask the user agent to ignore an object

is left up-to the
should be
is left up to the


"5 Otherwise,

the element is a widget<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#widget0> element:"
Not very clear structure.
It should probably be:
"Otherwise, if the element is a widget<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#widget0> element:"

"Let root element be the documentElement of doc."
documentElement could be referenced to DOM3


be the result of apply the
should be (a few  times)
be the result of applying the

then the attribute is in error<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#in-error> the user agent must ignore<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#ignore> it.
should be
then the attribute is in error<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#in-error> and the user agent must ignore<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#ignore> it.

"Otherwise, continue this algorithm."
Seems not needed.

Content element:

If the type<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#type0> attribute is used,
could be
If the type<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#type0> attribute is present,

If the charset<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#charset0> attribute is used,
could be
If the charset<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#charset0> attribute is present,

If a required<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#required> attribute is used,
could be
If a required<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#required> attribute is present

... ignore this element/attribute. Stop processing this element ...
Here, better linking to the preceding "if" could add clarity. A "." (dot) and imperative mode may result in misunderstanding (there are many instances of this case).

Step 8
then skip this Step and
should be
then skip this step and

If potential-start-file is null or an error, ignore<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#ignore>
should be
If potential-start-file is null or in error, ignore<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#ignore>
But potential-start-file cannot be in error, since there is no such assignment.

Let start file content-type<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#start-file-content-type> be the media type<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#media-type0> given in the second column of the default start files<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#default-start-files> table.
How to choose the item from that columnt?

Stopped at Step 8. To be continued.

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