PROV-ISSUE-211 (Incremental-discovery-description): Possible revision to description of incremental discovery [Accessing and Querying Provenance]

PROV-ISSUE-211 (Incremental-discovery-description): Possible revision to description of incremental discovery [Accessing and Querying Provenance]

http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/211

Raised by: Olaf Hartig
On product: Accessing and Querying Provenance

Raised in email by Olaf:

> * Sec.6.1, step 1: I propose the following sentence instead: "For a given
> resource obtain its associated provenance-uri-1  and its associated entity-
> uri-1 using ..."
>
> * Sec.6.1, step 4: "... find its provenance-URI and continue from Step 1." --
> It should be: "... from Step 2."
>
> * Sec.6.1, step 4: I propose to change the Note to: "an HTTP HEAD request for
> entity-uri-2 may be used ..."
>
> * Sec.6.1: "To reduce the overhead of multiple HTTP requests ..." -- I suggest
> to consider providing such prov:hasProvenance links as preferred practice and
> to adjust the paragraph accordingly.

response by GK:

At the time of writing this, I can't be sure this does not change the meaning of the words, so I'm posting this as an issue.

Received on Monday, 9 January 2012 15:03:26 UTC