Editorial Update to Privacy Requirements draft

I have updated the Privacy Requirements draft

http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/privacy-reqs/ (reload may be required)

Changes:

- Added a new section on architectural approach, revising Robin's  
draft and fitting it into the introduction.

- Added a new section "Requirements related to User Expectations of  
Data Use" and sub-sections for relevant privacy elements.

- Linked privacy principles bullets to sections, updated formatting.

- Added use case to minimization section as second paragraph.

- Fixed validation issues

For Tracker, this should complete ACTION-157

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia

Received on Wednesday, 7 April 2010 16:37:27 UTC