Re: PROV-ISSUE-444 (prov-o-to-last-call): Review PROV-O for last call [PROV-O HTML] from Timothy Lebo on 2012-07-09 (public-prov-wg@w3.org from July 2012)

From: Timothy Lebo <lebot@rpi.edu>
Date: Mon, 9 Jul 2012 10:46:47 -0400
To: Paul Groth <p.t.groth@vu.nl>
Cc: Provenance Working Group <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
Message-Id: <6E47CE4E-3E19-4F10-91F8-9A93C915394E@rpi.edu>

Paul,

On Jul 7, 2012, at 10:50 AM, Paul Groth wrote:

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> ==3.2 Expanded Terms==
> - I wonder if the 5 categories should be more prominent

How do you suggest they become more prominent?
Why is the bold "first, second, third, fourth, fifth" in the corresponding paragraphs inadequate?

Thanks,
Tim

Received on Monday, 9 July 2012 14:47:16 UTC