XProc Editors Draft 2007-07-19: Section 3.4 Comments

In the section on "Specified inline", the XSLT namespace is actually 
declared on the inline stylesheet. I wonder whether this might make 
people think that it *has* to be declared there (as if the inline 
document must be self-contained). Just moving it to the <p:xslt> element 
(or omitting it entirely, since the XProc namespace, necessary here, is 
also omitted) would at least prevent that confusion. (The same goes for 
the "Specified explicitly empty" section.)

I don't actually understand what the last paragraph in the "Specified 
inline" section means.

In "Specified explicitly empty", I think the Note about XPath is 
normative rather than informative and therefore shouldn't be a note.

Jeni
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Jeni Tennison
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Received on Monday, 23 July 2007 10:52:40 UTC