[outreach] Re: Executive summary / Group goals

- dlongley@

Hi folks, I had quite a hack at the page…

I trimmed the intro a bit, and tried to bring the focus back to working to develop appropriate standards to improve the Web, and payment.

I put all the goals into a single list again. I tried to mimc the structure Ian had used.

I expanded on the innovation, in part attempting to capture what Dave was talking about on this thread.

I added a *proposal* which I am not sure has general agreement (so I noted that), that a standards framework should allow for "person to person" transactions, as well as those where a business is involved.

And I probably made a mess, and obscured something important. So please check, and propose improvements…

https://www.w3.org/Payments/IG/wiki/ExecSummary

cheers

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Received on Friday, 27 February 2015 16:53:55 UTC