- From: WCAG 2.0 Comment Form <nobody@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 03:45:21 +0000 (GMT)
- To: public-comments-wcag20@w3.org
Name: Judy Brewer Email: jbrewer@w3.org Affiliation: W3C/WAI, on behalf of the Education and Outreach Working Group Document: W2 Item Number: intro Part of Item: Comment Type: editorial Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): The amount of jargon in the introduction makes it less helpful than possible as introductory material; for instance, \"\"conformance\", \"success criteria\", \"how to meet links\", \"intent\", \"sufficient techniques\", \"baseline assumptions.\" Proposed Change: Copyedit for increased use of plain English explanations; and/or introduce the jargon later in the introduction.
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