From: Ronald.Tschalaer@psi.ch (Life is hard... and then you die.)
Date: Tue, 17 Mar 1998 18:25:28 +0200
To: JG@pa.dec.com
Subject: minor corrections to draft-ietf-http-v11-spec-rev-03.txt

---

  Hi Jim,

here are a few (mostly) minor typos in draft-ietf-http-v11-spec-rev-03.txt.

Section 8.1.4, lines 2417 and 2419:

    ...
    without user interaction so long as the request sequence is idempotent
    (see section 9.1.2);.Non-idempotent methods or sequences MUST NOT be
                       ^^^
    automatically retried, although user agents MAY offer a human operator
    the choice of retrying the request(s).The automatic retry SHOULD NOT be
                                         ^^

Section 9.1.2, line 2680:

    However, it is possible that a sequence of several requests is non-
    idempotent, even if all of the methods executed in that sequence is
                                                                     ^^
    idempotent. (A sequence is idempotent if a single execution of the

  "is" should be "are"


Section 14.3, line 5258, is still not right:

           Accept-Encoding: gzip;q=1.0, identity; q=0.5; *;q=0
                                                       ^
    should be

           Accept-Encoding: gzip;q=1.0, identity; q=0.5, *;q=0


Section 14.9.2, line 5645:

    ...
    mechanism for ensuring privacy. In particular, malicious or compromised
    caches may not recognize or obey this directive; and communications
                                                   ^
    networks may be vulnerable to eavesdropping.

  the ";" ought to be a ",", I believe


Section 14.36, line 7160:

    If the field value is a partial URI, it SHOULD be interpreted relative
    to the Request-URI. The URI MUST NOT include a fragment.See section
                                                           ^^

Section 19.6, line 8706:

    persistent connections described in section Error! Reference source not
                                                ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    found..
    ^^^^^^

Section 19.7.1, line 9066:

    "identity" (section 3.6.2), "gzip" (section 3.4.1), "compress" (section
    3.4.1), and "deflate" (section 3.4.1).The registry should note that
                                         ^^

Section 20 (Index), line 9438:

    Tim Berners.Lee, 137                   rules on use of, 75
               ^
  should be

    Tim Berners-Lee, 137                   rules on use of, 75


  Cheers,

  Ronald