ISSUE-180
wsc-xit spelling mistakes
wsc-xit spelling mistakes (public comment)
- State:
- CLOSED
- Product:
- wsc-usecases
- Raised by:
- Bill Doyle
- Opened on:
- 2008-01-14
- Description:
- From public comments
raised by: Al Gilman Alfred.S.Gilman@ieee.org
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-usable-authentication/2008Jan/0000.html
Spelling Mistakes
1. Spelling mistake in the Abstract section:
The abstract states:
Since this Note discusses the assumptions, goals, and processes the
group will use to develop its recommendations, the intended audience
is similiar to that of the charter of the Working Group;...
Reviewer's comments: the word "similiar" seems to have been misspelt.
2. Spelling mistake in Section 6.5:
While on the move, Alice suddenly remembers she has to make an urgent
banking transaction. She has used her mobile browser previously for
retrieving information from the web, but this time she decides to use
her phone due to the urgency. She starts her mobile phone browser and
enters a URL that she recalls having seen on her home desktop
browser. After some delay, longer than usual, the phone starts
showing a page. Due to screen size, Alice notices that the layout is
somewhat familiar, but still not the same as the one in her dekstop.
She can't see the full URL either. Alice scrolls and spots the link
that takes her to the transaction page and clicks on it. After some
delay, the phone displays a page asking her to enter her usual bank
credentials. How is Alice to know that her bank credentials can be
safely entered into the page?
Reviewer's Comments: The second occurrence of the word "desktop" is
misspelt as "dekstop".
3. Spelling mistake in Section 9.3.2:
9.3.2 Hostname
DNS is a hierarchical name space. Name assignments on upper layers of
this name space are controlled by various policy and business
processes and often thought of as identifiers for real-world
entities; name assignments on the lower layers are typically choosen
freely and often thought of as identifiers for individual hosts or
services. However, these intricacies are not widely understood.
Studies show that users will interpret brand names that occur on any
level of a domain name as a signal that allows them to assume some
kind of reliable association between the brand and the domain name
[Security Toolbars].
Reviewer's Comments: The word "chosen" is misspelt as "choosen". - Related Actions Items:
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- Related emails:
- ISSUE-180 (wsc-xit spelling mistakes ): wsc-xit spelling mistakes (public comment) [wsc-xit] (from sysbot+tracker@w3.org on 2008-01-14)
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